Well, I'm waiting for the big conclusion now!
And it's nice to see the names of so many old NGers that I haven't heard from in ages... the nostalgia value alone makes things interesting.
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Just looking at the length, I could tell how detailed it is. Excellent job on your part.
lol wut?
You have no life.
Must've taken 3 hours writing this shit
Good one.
jesus. that's a lot of writing.
I've never been to China. Thanks for showing me their GREAT WALL.
=:)
Ni hao
tl;dr.
:D
*bans*
:D
Good story, I would have put it in shorter parts, y'know, like do one chapter, then make a new one with the other one. Other than that I <3 this story!
woa thats alot of stuff
how could you not like metal gear awsome 2, its the best ever
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Ai Ni, you are my Superstar!
:) So, I re-read everything... My overall impression:
i) Creativity was high, you used a lot of NG references but also brought your own spin into things.
ii) Focus was good, you didn't focus on one character too much, this helped move the story along.
Having said the above however, some parts did feel very rushed, with short sentences, conversations and descriptions. I found I'd have to imagine settings, background or whatever which was sometimes a bit hard.
iii) Language was good, sometimes a bit hard to read, but I liked it overall, well done for proofing it again :)
Anyway, overall, I just want to say well done for completing a massive project, yourself, Monocrom and Me we've got the blanket over long stories ;-)
Psyche analysis thread:
Words; over 110,000 ;-) Not including filler posts :)
Thank you! I know some parts may look rushy or such... but I really didn't want this story to enter deep into details since it wasn't based on Characters I created. The place where I put the most work on details was definitely the decors.
Glad you enjoyed it, I hope you will enjoy my next Story :D
oh wow
<3
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Sarai
Any reason you didn't PM me? :)
I liked the catch up :)
Loki
Hehe I planned to PM you when the conclusion was going to be posted >.<
But there's the whole revised story. Conclusion should be here really soon :)